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f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rrezv wrote
(I love this, and even though I am not completely caught up with puss in boots, I am VERY caught up with Dr. Doofenshmirtz)
A knock comes from Dr. Doofenshirtz' door. As he answers it he says "Ahhh, Per- wait you're not Perry!"
"Si senõr, I, the amazing Puss in boots, am here to stop your... whatever this is."
"Well, Mr. Inboots, you have fallen right into my trap." Doofenshmirtz proclaimed, pulling out a comically large red button that dropped down a cage. "You see, with my new Animal-to-people-inator and the People-to-animal-inator, I will control the whole tri-state area." He said, going into his whole monolog. While this is happening, Puss squeezed through the bars. Dr. Doofenshmirtz explained "You see, my plan is to make the mayor a cat, that way no one can stop me from becoming the ruler, and whenever my term runs out, I will-" he stopped as Puss put his arm on his shoulder to lean on.
Puss said "No, keep explaining."
And so he did, "Where was I? Oh, and I chose a cat because no one really likes cats, they just scratch and hiss at everyone."
"Oh? Well then we must fight." he said, pulling out his saber, "to prove to you that I do more than "hiss and scratch""
Dr. Doofenshmirtz grabbed a wrench from the nearby table and the two exchanged numerous blows inching closer and closer to the machine. After a few seconds, Doofenshmirtz accidentally hit the machine and aimed it straight at himself. He yelled out "CURSE YOU PUSS INBOOTS!!!" before being turned into a black cat.
"Looks like my job here is done." Puss in boots said.
Apprehensive_Cow1242 t1_j5txzqr wrote
Just then, a very confused looking Perry the Platypus walks in and surveys the scene. Once Perry sees Puss, they exchange a knowing nod of respect.
Subtleknifewielder t1_j5qyxip wrote
Hellboy, and Hank McCoy (Beast) from X-Men, because Hellboy mistakes Beast as something paranormal that needs brought in.
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5r8o0l wrote
(I love this premise btw)
As Hellboy walked into the train station, he saw Beast and Storm talking to each other out of his ear shot.
"Oh come on, this job never stops." He said as he started running towards beast.
In an instant, beast was knocked to the ground, his air forced out of him. Storm turned to Hellboy, who just said "that's not who you think it is. Run." Before smashing a hole through the ground and dragging beast through it.
"Come here you demon." Hellboy shouted as beast tried to get to a safe place to talk.
"I don't know who you think I am, but I'm definitely not them. I'm no demon, I'm just a mutant." Beast said.
"Yeah yeah, sure you are bud." Hellboy said, grabbing Beast and punching him in the gut.
"Oof, ouch, that broke some ribs." Beast said through the pain.
"Get over it, you're going to hell anyways." Hellboy said, his arm poised back, ready to strike, but right as he is about to punch, he is knocked back by a massive gust of wind provided by storm. "He us not who you think, this is beast, a human that looks like an animal because of his mutant abilities . " Storm patiently explained.
"Alright, but if he bites your head off while you sleep, don't say I didn't warn you." Hellboy said before walking off.
Subtleknifewielder t1_j5s5f4x wrote
I chuckled, thanks for this :D
Glad you enjoyed the premise ^_^
that_one_author t1_j5r39is wrote
Omni-man vs Superman
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rht3m wrote
(I'm not caught up with Invincible, but I'll try my best)
As Omni-man was surveying the arctic, he saw a weird snow structure that seemed interesting. As he approached, he saw the large doors open to reveal a man with a weird red blue and yellow uniform. "Well hello there, who might you be?" Superman asked. "You don't know? I'm Omni-man, superhero, savior of the world, never heard of me?" Superman was perplexed, but realized he had been in far weirder circumstances, he played along, "ok Omni-man, I'm also a hero. Why don't you show me what you can do." He said before levitating above the ground.
The two clashed in mid-air, battling for dominance before Omni-man broke off underneath the man of steel and threw him to the ground. He launched a flurry of attacks before Superman froze him with his breath.
Superman took a second to admire Omni-man's physique with his X-ray vision, which was unlike anything he had every seen. As he looked, he saw the ice crack and break as Omni-man was freed.
The two fought ferociously, one earth shattering hit after another, before Superman started realizing a trend. Every time the ice crackled from the air pressure generated by the attacks, Omni-man winced. So when Superman decided the games were over, he started creating sonic claps to damage Omni-man.
After only a few seconds, Superman took his victory.
that_one_author t1_j5rjxba wrote
I recommend finishing the show, then rewriting. Superman doesn’t win so easy. Fun fight tho.
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rlhsp wrote
I will, also I appreciate the feedback, I really need practice writing fight scenes that seem more balanced, so any suggestions are welcome
that_one_author t1_j5rnufi wrote
Well, suggestions I have.
Fight scenes are made of 3 things.
Characters, motive, and setting.
Your characters and their abilities, be it training or weapons or superpowers, these should be consistent and used during the fight.
Motive, people don’t fight for no reason, why people fight is the difference between something people want to skip and something that draws people to the edge of their seat.
setting. True professionals and panicked citizens alike will try and use their environment to their advantage. Imagine where your characters are fighting and what is around them. Utilizing what you “see” makes fights not only more interesting but more engaging, as it can be unexpected. I.e. in a playground and wrapping the chain of a swing around a neck, or stomping on the seesaw, etc…
This will extend your fight scene but it’s not all of it. I like to watch the fight in my mind as if it is a well choreographed movie or anime, then describe each hit, the sounds sights smells the feeling of a face smashed into snow and rocks and blood pours from the broken nose, the Pain of each strike and, as a bonus that’s only available in writing, the thoughts of the participants In real time.
choose one or 2 of these things to focus on and go from there.
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rro1j wrote
Ok, thank you so much
Ishouldbeworking01 t1_j5rblgy wrote
Alfred Pennyworth (DC universe-Batmans butler) VS Edwin Jarvis (Marvel universe-Tony starks butler)
I understand they dont have powers, but they do know two guys with lots of cool toys....
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rl8nf wrote
(Anyone who knows the "I'm the butler" scene knows who's winning this fight, but this should be fun.)
While Bruce was out at Metropolis, he sent a message out to Tony to request his butler help Alfred with some sparring matches. A few weeks later, the two stood face to face, ready for a brawl.
As they readied their equipment, they ran over the rules: no killing, but blood was allowed, no hitting the face or dirty hits, and weapons are meant to be kept to a minimum.
They started off slow, circling each other, before Jarvis went in with a kick to the gut.
Alfred bounced off the ring of the arena and punched Jarvis in the face.
As Jarvis wiped the blood from his lip, he elbowed Alfred in the chest.
A flurry of attacks went back and forth before either drew weapons, but Jarvis pulled out a (very small and relatively harmless) flash-bang from his coat pocket and momentarily blinded Alfred to get a few good punches in.
Alfred then drew his knife, wishing to end this fight rather quickly to go back to his tasks around the house. So, as Jarvis was pushed back onto the ring of the arena, Alfred stabbed the knife through Jarvis' hand to pin him to the rope. Alfred politely bowed, giving feedback to Jarvis, who's hand was still stuck, then (after pulling the knife out of Jarvis' hand) leaving the arena.
Ishouldbeworking01 t1_j5rlz8k wrote
Ha interesting take, Alfred truly comes across like the bigger IDGAF, in nearly every story he is in. thank you for the story
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rm4rf wrote
Of course, thank you for the suggestion, and also any criticism/suggestion are welcome
Murlock_Holmes t1_j5qj4h7 wrote
Peak Itachi Uchiha vs. pre-Namek Krillin. Krillin knows not to look in Itachi's eyes but that's the only prep either of them has.
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5r40pj wrote
(I'm not super well versed with either the Naruto or DBZ universes, but I will try from my little knowledge)
Krillin approached the stage, his eyes glued to the floor.
"So," Itachi said, "you know my ability. It appears my reputation precedes me by quite a lot these days."
Krillin nodded as he got into his fighting stance.
"Straight into this then." Itachi said as he started doing his hand signs.
The announcer yelled across the stadium "Ready? BEGIN!"
Itachi immediately used shadow clone jutsu to confuse Krillin and give himself a feel for how powerful his opponent is. Krillin took the bait, assuming it was some kind of trick, decided to attack the closest one with a punch to the gut. After it landed, he relentlessly hit the clone until it was out of the ring.
As Krillin focused on his target, he failed to notice the other ones closing in. He turned around to meet a wave of fireballs headed straight towards him. He jumped up, very confused but quickly realizing they were all real.
Itachi was surprised by his speed, but took the opportunity to throw shurikens at him while he was in the air. Krillin dodged these with relative ease.
Itachi started to get another attack ready when his clones started falling. Krillin said behind the last Itachi "Good fight, you sure got some cool abilities." Before punching him in the back and knocking him out.
SmallBeanKatherine t1_j5reo0l wrote
Thanos vs Sans Undertale
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rlso3 wrote
I'm sorry, I do not know the undertale lore and how powerful he is, so I'm afraid I won't be able to write about this, again, very sorry
SignificantScore5310 t1_j5rflga wrote
Katniss Everdeen (Hunger Games) vs. Vin (Mistborn)
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rmbm3 wrote
I'm sorry, I don't know Vin, so I don't think my story will be all that true to the story, but I xan definitely try if you want
SignificantScore5310 t1_j5v6lrb wrote
that's alright. it's a cool magic/superpower system so i thought it could be interesting, and I 100% recommend the series, but i'm not going to ask you to write a character you don't know.
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5v9m61 wrote
Ok, thank you for the book recommendation anyway, I'll definitely check it out and (if I don't forget by then) come back and write the fight
donaldhobson t1_j5rlqm0 wrote
Fawkes (phoenix from harry potter) vs Elsa (frozen)
Janus-Moth t1_j5rs18v wrote
Dr Strange against Darth Vader set inside the Batcave
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5rwglm wrote
(Definitely an interesting one)
"Greetings, you wouldn't possibly be from another universe would you?" Dr. Strange asked.
"I am... and I wish... to stay here." Darth Vader said.
"I'm afraid that is not possible because if you don't leave, I do not get to either. This is all my fault, I never should have pushed America this far." Dr. Strange muttered under his breath. "Why did it have to be in a billionaires cave."
Before Dr. Strange could say another word, Darth Vader force choked him straight into his hand and whispered "You... will not... put me... back there."
Dr. Strange clawed for air before creating a portal. This surprised Vader so much that he dropped Strange onto the floor. "What is this?" He questioned
"That would be a portal." Dr. Strange said, inching closer to Darth Vader, "I assumed a dimension that figured out telekinesis would have figured out portals by now. As Darth Vader turned around, Dr. Strange touched him, which made his soul go outside of his body. Dr. Strange carefully explained "this is your soul. I could disintegrate your body if I wanted to. Or I could drown you, so do you want this the easy way or the hard way?"
Darth Vader used the force to bring his body back to him and regain control.
"Impressive, I haven't seen anything like that in, well, never surprisingly."
"I'm sick... of these... games." He said, drawing his lightsaber. The dim light illuminated most of the cave in red.
"Now THAT is a cool weapon, hold on, I think I have something like it." Dr. Strange said, pulling a glowing yellow whip out of nowhere.
The sound of the two weapons clashing and clanking echoed through the nearly empty room. Sparks flew as they raged on, strike after strike
The two fought for several minutes, pushing and pulling, then Darth Vader stumbled over the edge. Dr. Strange used his whip as a makeshift lasso to hold Vader while he created the portal. Darth Vader said "You fought well..." before falling back into his home dimension
Janus-Moth t1_j5rs952 wrote
Dr Doofenshmirtz vs Iron Man
adamzam t1_j5rtsm0 wrote
Tony Stark vs Bruce Wayne-- not as Batman
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Icy_Wildcat t1_j5sctis wrote
Angel Dust from Hazbin Hotel vs. Keenie from Helluva Boss, because the latter called the former a walking STD slag pit.
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5tda6v wrote
I'm sorry, I have not watched either (though both are on my watch list) but I can still try if you want
Icy_Wildcat t1_j5teeuc wrote
Both are on YouTube, so I'd heavily recommend watching them first before trying.
Greatstampy t1_j5sf3lo wrote
(Fannon) Reformed!Dabi [from MHA] vs Elsa [Frozen 1]
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5tdd71 wrote
I'm not caught up with MHA yet, but I can try if you want
Greatstampy t1_j6gjdeg wrote
Finally found time to get back on Reddit again, sorry for the late response. Please do, I'd love to see it! :D
GarageRightNow t1_j5smp4w wrote
Tony Stark’s Iron Man (pre-nanotech, doesn’t matter when) vs. Ray Palmer’s the Atom
Mrrandom314159 t1_j5soyde wrote
Cyborg has been planning for the last 20 years for the confrontation. Finally, he and Brainiac engage in the final digital confrontation, with every networked device in the world coming under the control of one of them.
80s4evah t1_j5sqg76 wrote
Slave Knight Gael vs the Soul of Cinder (Dark Souls)
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5tdvqg wrote
I'm sorry, I have not played dark souls yet, so I don't think my fight will be anywhere near accurate
80s4evah t1_j5te2tn wrote
Ok, how about Percy Jackson vs Kratos?
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5u702w wrote
(I was waiting for someone to bring mythology into this, I'm gonna use pre-God of War 3 Kratos for this)
"You." Kratos proclaimed from outside camp half-blood "Son of Poseidon, have met your end."
"C'mon, which god is trying to kill me now? Is Ares back again? I told-" he stops at the sight of a being he hadn't seen before, "and who are you?"
"Kratos, son of Zeus, killer of the gods." He bellowed.
"OK, have you successfully killed any gods? Because that name doesn't just get thrown around." Percy questioned
"Indeed I have, including your former foe Ares." Kratos explained.
"So why are you trying to kill me? If you can kill Ares, why bother fighting me?" Percy asked
"Because you are the prophesied new God of the sea, so I came to put a stop to it." Kratos said pulling out the blades of Athena.
"Don't know about that seeing as how I'd have to sit next to Zeus for all of eternity, but if you insist." Percy said, uncapping riptide. He slowly exited camp half-blood near where Thalia' tree used to be.
Percy said "It's just me and you now. Do you mind if I ask one more question before we start? Are you as much of asshole as Zeus?"
Kratos did not like to be compared to Zeus, so he charged Percy.
Percy blocked the first two attacks and jumped out of the way of the third, then retaliated with a brutal swing aimed at the gut. Kratos leaped over the strike, bringing his blade back towards Percy' shoulder. The cut was not too deep, but Percy still had to grit his teeth to not yell at the pain. Percy realized this wasn't some game. Kratos was really trying to kill him. After he realized this, he ran to the river to heal, but Kratos stopped him right before he got there
"Did you truly believe I would let you do that?" Kratos asked.
"No, but I didn't need you to." Percy said as a wave of water splashed the two of them. Percy' shoulder wound healed instantly.
Kratos struggled to stand through the force of the wave while Percy slowly walked over and said "You're in my field now." Before stabbing Kratos in the chest. Kratos tried to yell, but was muffled by the water. He reached for his blade, but Percy manipulated the water to push it away from him. By this point Percy had moved them all the way to the beach where a crowd of Half-bloods gathered to watch the fight. Kratos pushed through the water, stabbing Percy relentlessly in the chest, but it was no use in the water. After a few minutes, Percy decided he had enough and quickly chopped off one of Kratos' arms. Kratos screamed in pain as the water turned a crimson red. Percy said to him "Either leave now or lose your head. Your choice."
Kratos was infuriated, never had he been embarrassed like this. He took one final swing at Percy's chest, but his movement was too slow. Percy sliced off his head with one foul swoop.
Percy walked back to the shore where he was met by thunderous applause
shinylungburger t1_j5syqkz wrote
BF (fannon) from fnf modding vs BF (cannon) from fnf (bc theres several fannon bfs you can do any of them but if you want specifically one, ill specify the type from vs mann co, whitty and indie cross. Being a bit of an asshole who loves singing and only speaks normally near those they are close to or if they gotta speak their mind.)
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5te233 wrote
I'm sorry, I am not familiar with fnf (which I assume is Friday night funkin) but I can try if you really want
shinylungburger t1_j5th0l3 wrote
Yeah, even if you dont really know em, might as well give a shot anyways.
Apprehensive_Cow1242 t1_j5ty5dk wrote
Ms Piggy v Hulk. Hulk had just insulted Kermit over his fuzzy green skin
Independent-Flow5686 t1_j5u3k3e wrote
Butler(Artemis Fowl) vs Bane(Batman)
Also, Batman vs the Punisher.
SOLITARY_WOLF_2806 t1_j5v9npw wrote
Red Hood (DC) VS Stain (MHA)
Jason knows to be careful of Stain's quirk, but that's about all he knows.
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5vllf4 wrote
(This is very interesting. I will have to make a few assumptions though. The first being Jason doesn't know exactly what Stain's ability is (which I think is what you meant) and the second being Red Hood and Stain have minimal armor for balancing, otherwise Red Hood SMOKES Stain)
After months of tracking the mysterious killer, Red Hood finally caught him in the act. Unfortunately, he wasn't trying to find him in this moment. Instead of him being Red Hood, he was Jason Todd, who was returning from a party he was forced to go to by Bruce.
"Oh come ON!!!" Jason yelled as he realized that this was a one time opportunity, either attack him now without the suit or let him get away, possibly killing more people.
He threw off his coat jacket as he ran towards the alleyway. As he reached the site, he saw the madman standing over over a well known entrepreneur who was staring in fear as Stain slowly licked the blood off of his serrated sword. Even though Jason didn't have his usual metal helmet, he did, however, have his red batman mask.
Stain turned to Jason, grinning from ear to ear. Jason shouted "You aren't going to kill again." Then cringed realizing how dumb he sounded. "Oh? And why is that?" Stain remarked. Jason said "This is why." As he charged towards Stain.
Jason drew his pistols and blocked Stain's attack, then kicked him away from the man. He motioned to the man to get up, but he was frozen with fear in his eyes.
Stain charged at Jason again, who blocked again but not before Stain cut Jason's shirt. Jason leaped back before he could get cut by the blade. Jason shot 2 bullets at Stain as he charged at him, both hitting the wall behind him. Stain jumped at Jason, his sword aimed for his gut. Jason jumped back, but was lightly knicked, drawing blood. Stain was about to lick the crimson liquid before falling down, hands clutching his stomach. The smoke was still billowing from the barrel of Jason's gun. Jason walked away before the Entrepreneur could unmask him.
SOLITARY_WOLF_2806 t1_j5vmm97 wrote
Quick and well thought out. That's on par to what i think Jason would do.
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5vmr3j wrote
Thank you, if you have any criticisms it would be greatly appreciated
ArgumentativeNerfer t1_j5vdtbc wrote
Dr. Gregory House vs. Dr. Steven Strange (Neurosurgeon Dr. Strange, before he became Sorcerer Dr. Strange).
No_Ad_4312 t1_j5vudgk wrote
Peter Pan vs Dr. Eggman
Used-East4520 t1_j5vv7wg wrote
Mr. Bean vs. Goku
PcDickSlurpAllstars t1_j5x5n8m wrote
Ainz Ooal Gown from Overlord vs Tanya Degurechaff from Youjo Senki
f---thezodiac OP t1_j5x6560 wrote
I'm sorry, I have both of those on my "manga to read" list, but haven't gotten to it yet, but if you have another match up you would like I can try those
PcDickSlurpAllstars t1_j5x6kmh wrote
Nah its chill! How bout Sauron (full power/pre-loss of fair form) (book version preferably) vs Sebastian Michaelis from Black Butler
Lv120Akagi t1_j63h8he wrote
Iwatani Naofumi (Shield Hero) vs Maple (Bofuri)
Totally_Not_Thanos t1_j5righx wrote
Puss in boots vs Dr. Doofenshmirtz.