indyaj t1_iwqntkd wrote
Have you considered living for awhile in the place you're writing about? It will make you're book so much better.
TucsonWriter t1_iwqzb3f wrote
*your book
Doc_coletti t1_iwr23sj wrote
Already making a good impression on the locals…
Laeek t1_iwr56hz wrote
That was a test to make sure your actually a writer
TucsonWriter t1_iwr5gj7 wrote
Oh, bravo! 😁
dedaluscrashing t1_iwr9d4o wrote
Since you went there, it’s not “off of X,” it’s just “off X.”
TucsonWriter t1_iwr9ny9 wrote
If you want to be technical, it's "based on."
sy33d_am33r_ali t1_iwrqmqk wrote
With an attitude like that, your dialogue will never be believable. Gotta get the local dialect right.
dedaluscrashing t1_iwsapbk wrote
Right? Bub.
dedaluscrashing t1_iwrapem wrote
Well one’s a grammatical issue and one’s a matter of semantics.
HikerKartrashian t1_iwr0vly wrote
Oh good answer, it’s horrible here anyway (too many colloquialisms). Don’t move here. 😂
indyaj t1_iwri6ge wrote
lol. Oops. The sentence was going to say something else and I didn't edit it.
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