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hs1308 t1_iy7pdqe wrote
Reply to comment by MyNameIsNotBob_1121 in [WP] You and your best friend are Rangers, but one of you uses guns and the other bows and slings. Your arguments over either school of weaponry has at last reached boiling point. by 28th_Stab_Wound
Was curious to see how one would defend bows and arrows against guns, good to see that you don't. Guns are guns.
hs1308 t1_ixmqt3e wrote
Reply to comment by YOMGuitar in [WP] You're a siren who is trying to lure a shipful of sailors to their death. "Please", one of the sailors beg as he swims onto your island, almost too willingly. "Stop. You're so bad at singing." by ReadySetSantiaGO
Started off great but you could have taken the story in a different direction.
The siren was delighted to have found someone who could resist her charm, which was a really good hook but eventually you still had her charm him. That was a bit off for me.
Sorry, but honest feedback.
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Reply to comment by Substantial-Damage96 in [WP] You and your best friend are Rangers, but one of you uses guns and the other bows and slings. Your arguments over either school of weaponry has at last reached boiling point. by 28th_Stab_Wound
I agree on bows being quiet argument. Could be an advantage in some situations.