There’s something about the scene to scene writing that I actually enjoy. I cant put my finger on it but i thoroughly enjoyed the whole first sequence with the car accident leading up to the contract meeting. It was brisk and engaging
I think in terms of overall narrative I do have issues though
Ahh okay. I guess from a Writer’s POV that helps a bit. I still think it was a strange thing to do after your child died, and I know it can be chalked up to a writer’s creative process and own grieving process but it still felt all too convenient to me though.
L_sigh_kangeroo OP t1_jdx4op6 wrote
Reply to comment by StellaAI in Just finished Verity by Colleen Hoover, here’s my quick and honest review: by L_sigh_kangeroo
Okay! I appreciate that. I guess I haven’t really been into reading since high school so I was afraid of coming off as out of touch.