EmperorBamboozler t1_jcs04fp wrote on March 19, 2023 at 2:40 AM Reply to comment by Krutaun in [WP] Everyone has something referred to as “Narrative Potential Energy” the higher this value is, the more involved in a story you are. Protagonists have a high amount as they drive the story forward, and background characters have little. Somehow you have negative narrative potential. by -Mothonawall- I usually don't like poems in this style but this is well done and I enjoyed it! Good work. Permalink Parent 3
EmperorBamboozler t1_jcs04fp wrote
Reply to comment by Krutaun in [WP] Everyone has something referred to as “Narrative Potential Energy” the higher this value is, the more involved in a story you are. Protagonists have a high amount as they drive the story forward, and background characters have little. Somehow you have negative narrative potential. by -Mothonawall-
I usually don't like poems in this style but this is well done and I enjoyed it! Good work.