CriticalNovel22
CriticalNovel22 t1_j9twm08 wrote
Reply to comment by theevilmidnightbombr in Return of the Grinch: sequel to Dr Seuss classic will hit shelves before Christmas by misana123
Oh the irony.
CriticalNovel22 t1_j9tcis5 wrote
Reply to Return of the Grinch: sequel to Dr Seuss classic will hit shelves before Christmas by misana123
Ttying to squeeze more money out of an aging franchise.
Typical liberal wokery.
/s
CriticalNovel22 t1_j67r847 wrote
Yes.
He's one of those authors that could be categorised as "writing for people who don't like to read".
CriticalNovel22 t1_j67q60o wrote
Reply to comment by MineryTech in I found this in my bag of baby carrots by MediumFriendly
Weirdly, it is
> A baby carrot is a carrot harvested before reaching maturity and sold at that smaller size. A baby-cut carrot is a small piece cut from a larger carrot; baby-cut carrots are often marketed as "baby carrots", leading to potential confusion.[1]
CriticalNovel22 t1_j5t156q wrote
Reply to comment by playboypink in Just finished The Silent Patient and have only one nagging question… *contains spoilers* by playboypink
That's a valid point, so I'll just clarify what I mean.
>isn’t every move a character makes in a book written solely for the author’s need for them to do so?
Yes and no.
On the most obvious level, it absolutely is.
The problem comes when a character does or says something that they have no reason to do or say other than the author needs them to.
So, in this example, the character says something because the author needs to create tension. That's fine. But what a competent author would do is give the character a reason for saying it.
Actions should be driven from character and/or story, not just a bunch of random stuff happening because it is convenient for the author. Because not only is this bad writing, but it is contemptuous to the readers.
This is the main problem I have with this book (aside from having the stupidest plot twist in all known literature). The whole world and everyone in it only act the way they do because the author needs it. Their actions aren't derived from character and the way things work (such as everything in the mental hospital) are set up to be convenient to the author.
Sure, people are free to take liberties, but if you're going to write about something, there needs to be at least some level of plausibility, which this completely lacks.
Honestly, I was so excited for this book and am a big fan of the pulpy, twisting mystery thriller, which is probably why this was such a massive let down. It wasn't even the hype (I picked it up randomly in a second hand book store), but it was such a poor effort on any other level than needs to be twisty that I couldn't help but be appalled.
CriticalNovel22 t1_j5syba9 wrote
Reply to comment by playboypink in Just finished The Silent Patient and have only one nagging question… *contains spoilers* by playboypink
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
But there is zero attempt to make a well crafted plot. People only act the way they do because the author needs them to, which is why there are countless loose ends. The author needed something suspenseful or a red herring and just chucked something random in and, as you said, never resolved it or weaved it into the story.
So, again, glad you enjoyed it, but I don't think there is any deeper meaning behind any of it than "the author needed this to happen, so it did"
CriticalNovel22 t1_j5sxb80 wrote
Reply to Just finished The Silent Patient and have only one nagging question… *contains spoilers* by playboypink
He said it becauae the book is stupid on every level and the writer has nothing but contempt for the reader and the craft so just does whatever to make this dumpster fire of a book seem cleverer than it is.
CriticalNovel22 t1_jd37eml wrote
Reply to comment by samanime in ELI5: Why does Google offer all these free services like Google Docs, Sheets, Drive, Sites, Forms, etc. without any ads on them? How does Google benefit from this and why do they invest so much in creating and maintaining them? by Elena_Edie
Yeah, because students become pros and spend thousands on the software they're familiar with because no one wants to relearn how to do things on new software.