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ZephyrInfernum t1_j0gdjkz wrote

Not the person you're replying to, but she needs an editor or to learn to properly edit herself. There's a litany of mistakes in grammar and punctuation that make it hard to read. That's the first thing

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beatyouwithahammer t1_j0nt5aa wrote

I didn't experience any difficulty reading the work. How interested were you in the topic?

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