Submitted by scarymaxx t3_11bad4h in nosleep

Grace was gone, and no one in the world could help me. I didn’t know if I had minutes or hours, but I knew exactly how it would go if I talked to the police.

I’d be bawling, telling them about the Crone, her old car, everything that had happened. And then all at once, we’d all forget Grace had ever existed. We’d look at each other awkwardly, not quite knowing what we were just talking about. And then they’d leave, and I’d go happily on with my life, forgetting I’d ever had a daughter in the first place.

There was only one place I could turn to, and it wasn’t a person: my house. I dropped Derek off with Amy, promising I’d explain everything later. Then I headed home.

“I need you,” I said as I got inside. “Anything you can do. Maybe you’ve got some kind of psychic link to other houses like you. Maybe you can eat the floorboards and make letters to tell me something. Maybe you can just magically teleport me where she is. Please. Anything. For Grace. I’m begging you.”

I felt crazy.. Delirious. Of course, these were all just guesses. For all I knew, the house didn’t even fully speak English or have any abilities beyond basic consumption.

I had never prayed, but then, I’d never really believed in anything. But I believed in my house. I fell to my knees, begging.

“Please,” I said. “Please.”

I didn’t know what I was asking.

Slowly, the house began to shake, little vibrations rattling from its foundation to its attic. At first the tremors were small, but then they began to grow, great heaves.

And as the smell of bile filled the air, I realized what was happening: my house was throwing up.

I walked through the rooms and halls, following the rancid waft of vomit, until I realized what I should have known all along. It was emanating from the basement. I ran down, holding my breath the whole way. As I did, the house gave one last great heave, shattering every window.

I raised an arm to my eyes, trying to protect myself from the falling glass. Then, when I looked up, I saw something in the hot spot, a tiny quivering lump.

When I approached, I saw feathers soaked in stomach acid. Then I recognized the bird. It had been the very one the Crone sacrificed to the house when she visited.

Now, looking half dead and soaked in the house’s acid, the bird took a hesitant step and fell. It got up and took another. Finally, it grew steady and looked up at me with the one good eye that had made it back from the other side.

“Help me,” I said. “Find Grace.”

The bird shook its feathers, a fine mist flying off in all directions. Then it flew out the window, barely making the ascent.

I sprinted up the stairs and ran outside, spotting the bird as it cleared my rooftop. It was headed northwest, weaving a little through the rain, but definitely headed in that direction. I got in the car and began to follow.

As I followed the bird, I ran every red light and stop sign. I went the wrong way on one way streets. I didn’t care. Whatever kept me on course. Every second, I thought of Grace, holding onto her memory in my mind as if that very act would keep her from disappearing.

I’m sure I would have hit a semi and died if I’d had to drive far. Lucky for me, the drive wasn’t far. Less than a mile from home, the bird suddenly stopped and fell from the sky. It landed in a dead lump in the middle of the street.

Somehow, I’d ended up in a quiet neighborhood I’d never visited before. Two long rows of upscale houses lined the sides, leading down to a pleasant cul de sac. The neighborhood must have been filled with children: tricycles and playhouses littered the front yards, and minivans parked in nearly every driveway.

Not knowing where to go next, I ran to the closest house and knocked on the door. After a few minutes, a gaunt looking woman answered it. She had a thousand yard stare, and her breath stank of wine.

“I need help,” I said. “I’m looking for my daughter.”

“I’ve always wanted a daughter,” she said, kind of dreamily.

I looked out at her lawn at a pink bike.

“Whose is that?” I asked, and she shrugged.

“No one’s, I guess. Been there a few weeks now. I didn’t want to throw it out. I guess I thought the little girl who it belongs to might come back and get it sometime. But I just wait and wait and wait…”

“Listen,” I said. “I need you to think. Is there an old woman that lives in this neighborhood? One that drives an old Buick?”

“Oh, you mean Sara White? Such a sweetheart. Always baking treats for the neighborhood.”

“Which house is she in?”

“The one at the end of the street,” she said. “The one with the roses. Can’t miss it.”

She paused for a second.

“Do you think that little girl will ever come back for her bike? Maybe your daughter would want it. If you ever find her. You can take it if you want. I don’t think that girl is coming back, now that I’m talking about it.”

She looked off, lost in thought again and repeated, “I’ve always wanted a daughter.”

The house wasn’t hard to find. Even pelted with rain, the Crone’s house was yellow and bright, bursting with roses everywhere. On the way there, I grabbed a hunting knife from the trunk of my car–I’d acquired a few good ones now, and had gotten good at using them.

The Crone’s door was unlocked. I opened it and walked in. As I did, the overpowering smell of cookies washed over me, and not in a good way. The air was thick with sugar, and definitely too warm, like I was in a baker’s oven.

“Grace!” I shouted, and I heard a whimper from a room down the hall. Without even thinking about it, I ran toward her. Stupid.

Of course, the Crone was waiting just at the side of the doorway as I entered, crouched with her own knife. I heard it before I felt it, a meaty squelch as the blade pierced my abdomen. Blood poured from the wound as I fell to the ground. The Crone backed up, practically gleeful.

“You mothers are all the same when it comes to your little ones,” she said. “That’s what makes it so easy.”

And for a second, the fear took me. I could see it all playing out as the Crone had planned. I’d disappear into nothing, then Grace soon after. Derek would be next. All of us gone forever, erased for eternity.

The blood poured from my wound, and I saw all of our futures slipping away, ready to join the hundred other children she’d already erased.

Then I looked across the room to see Grace. She was tied to a chair and placed at a table laden with cakes and pies, cookies and candies. Her face was smeared with chocolates and crumbs. She looked alive, but half asleep.

“Oh, don’t worry,” said the Crone. “She’s almost ready. Almost stuffed. And my oven… my oven is heating up nicely.”

She took a hesitant step toward me, kitchen knife in hand.

“I suppose I should ask how you found me,” she said. “These houses are so funny aren’t they? They do surprise you with their… abilities. Even after all this time, I’m still getting to know mine. And we’ve been together for a long, long time.”

As she spoke, I got to my feet, knife in hand. The Crone took a step back, suddenly less sure of herself.

“You’re stronger than you look,” she said. “I’ll give you that. Just how much have you been feeding that thing?”

It was true. Over the last few months, as I’d fed the house man after man, I’d noticed it was easier to lift the kids on the way to bed and that I no longer got winded on the stairs.

I took a step toward her, knife out.

“I’ve gotten to be something of an expert at stabbing people,” I told her. “I even took the time to study some basic human anatomy. Now, if I were a little shorter. Say, the height of a child, that stab you gave me probably would have been fatal. Probably would have torn my liver right in half. But the the thing is, bitch, I’m not a child. I’m a full grown woman.”

And then I lunged at her, stabbing forward. She brought up her hand to protect herself, and my blade went right through it. She drew her hand back, screaming. We were both dripping blood now. It was pooling at our feet as we assessed each other.

“I’m going to kill you,” I said. “Just like the rest of them. And then I’m going to feed you to your own house.”

“I told you before,” she said, holding up her blade. “Mine has very particular tastes.”

I nodded at her feet, where the blood was quickly disappearing. A faint scratching sound filled the air.

“Or maybe it’s just you,” I said. “Maybe there’s something vile you like to do. Something you like to blame on the house. Maybe you’re the one who likes children.”

As the words left my mouth, she screamed and lunged at me. It was exactly what I wanted. I easily dodged her swing and plunged my knife into her chest, right into her heart. She fell into a bloody lump on the floor.

As she bled out, her house continued to drink. Maybe it had been hungry for her for a long time. I’d never seen my own house eat so fast. Her body couldn’t have lasted more than a few seconds before she disappeared.

I ran to Grace and untied her. As soon as she got up from the chair, she threw up everywhere. Then she looked at me with wide eyes.

“I’m sorry,” she said. “She made me eat. I didn’t even want to. She made me.”

“I know,” I said. “I know.”

I looked all around us. The kitchen was like nothing I’d ever seen before. There were maybe four or five ovens, a couple of them twice the size of mine at home. There were also three fridges, a walk-in pantry, and a deep fryer.

I didn’t want to think about how the Crone had used everything in here. How old had she been? And how many children had she fed to the house?

It wasn’t the house’s fault. I genuinely believed that. Like Aaron had used to say, it was just a tool, one with a bad master. At the same time, I wasn’t sure who would wind up on its deed next. For all I knew, the Crone had a sister or a nephew with the exact same appetites, all ready to inherit it next.

And so I did the only thing that made sense. I turned on every burner on every gas stove to max. And then I took the gallons and gallons of cooking oil I found in the pantry and threw it everywhere.

The house tried to slurp it all up, but there was just too much to consume.

“I’m sorry,” I told it. “It’s not your fault. But you’re just too dangerous. I hope you’ll forgive me.”

And then I threw in the match.

By the time Grace and I were halfway to the car, the house was fully ablaze. And somewhere, beyond the sounds of breaking glass and crashing beams, I heard what I could only guess was the house screaming. It was a sound I’ll never forget, like a trillion cicadas all dying at once.

And it wasn’t just the house. Because as it died, so did its forgetting. And all through the neighborhood, all through the city, a hundred moms and dads suddenly ran to their windows, screaming into the dark as the memories hit in a tidal wave.

Step after step, I heard them calling out their names.

“Abby!”

“Pete!”

“Maresha!”

“Darius!”

Name after name screamed into the falling rain. And as I looked back into the flames behind me, I swear I saw a hundred small silhouettes looking out from the flames, watching me as I carried my beautiful, living Grace back to the car.

By the time I got Grace and Derek both home, the rain had cut through the broken windows, soaking the house to its bones. Though the wind howled, inside it was strangely quiet. I plucked a few flowers from outside and left them in a hot spot, but they didn’t wilt a bit.

What had I asked when I told it to find Grace? What had the house given up?

“Eat,” I told it, but it felt like I was shouting into a canyon, listening to my own echo.

Had I killed two houses, mine and hers? I sat in a ball, holding the children, weeping.

“You’re bleeding, mom,” said Derek. “You need to go to the hospital.”

“I know,” I said. “I know.”

And then I had one last idea. I walked over to the hot spot, standing right inside it, and let the blood and tears drip down.

“Please,” I said. “Please.” And I waited and waited, praying the blood would disappear.

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hubbellrmom t1_j9wx2qk wrote

I am so hooked! What a lovely perfect house! I hope that there is more to this story

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scarymaxx OP t1_j9wyo2o wrote

Thank you for loving my house like I do!

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hubbellrmom t1_j9x0koi wrote

Ngl, my family aren't as much into reading as I am, but I've been telling them about your house and they are invested! Here's hoping your house is ok

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rainlikeice t1_j9x1f75 wrote

I feel bad for the other house that it never had an owner who could help it 😢

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scarymaxx OP t1_j9x9m9w wrote

I agree. I don’t kill things arbitrarily. This felt like a dog with bad training that had to be put down. I’ll never know for sure if I made the right decision in killing it.

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Mysterious-Mist t1_ja38x78 wrote

Me too. I felt bad for the house. And for all the parents remembering.. I can’t imagine their trauma. I hope OP’s house is ok. I love her house, I hope it didn’t sacrifice itself to safe Grace.

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Braelin t1_j9wz7cn wrote

I have two sons but always wanted a daughter… wait…

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shadowsblueberry t1_j9xf9js wrote

Quick find a handy man and board up the windows to fix them in the future. Cook heaps of chicken soup. This house is sick and needs to be healed. You were doing a good thing and it helped you 😢

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beardedlizard15 t1_j9x59xi wrote

If the house dies, what kind of issues other than homelessness could follow?

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johnsonbrianna1 t1_j9xg7kj wrote

The memories of everyone who died in there coming back and everyone remembering. Then her going to jail for murders.

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beardedlizard15 t1_j9yoc5y wrote

I'm just trying to keep in mind that this has already happened so she must have not gone to jail, right?

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leah_paigelowery t1_j9xeopp wrote

I hope your house is ok. I’m glad you got grace back and killed that evil bat. Can’t wait for the next part

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emokitty1994 t1_j9xae5o wrote

Please tell me it’s still alive 😢😢

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onegirlgamesyt t1_j9xsuls wrote

All those children...those parents. This actually made me tear up looking at my toddler. So glad Grace is okay x

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LeXRTG t1_j9z5svt wrote

Ask your kids if they remember having a father. That should let you know if your house is okay or not

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MethAfricanTiger t1_ja0f5ek wrote

As for now, it's clear that these houses are capable of thinking. I'm not sure if they are slwf-awarw like humans, or maybe they are more like animals in that regard, but they can feel.

I think, that destroying one house shouldn't destroy completely different one. Tho logic like that can be unsuited to describe these clearly unnatural things.

Still, I think that you should be optimistic. Your house very well can be just scared. It for sure knows that you are responsible for burning that second house. I maybe needs time to trust you again.

I also think, that you did the right thing, if the other way would be just to leave the house alone. Even if not deliberately, these things still atract murdersers, and cuz of that they are dangerous. They are probably innocent in a way, but they are still very dangerous.

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tina_marie1018 t1_j9xbeoa wrote

I do hope your House is okay! I absolutely adore your House.

Please keep us updated on it.

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johnsonbrianna1 t1_j9xgb34 wrote

I think you made a mistake burning the other house. You don’t punish things/people for the actions of others.

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scarymaxx OP t1_j9xgma3 wrote

I question this every day. But fundamentally, the house was just too dangerous to allow to survive.

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johnsonbrianna1 t1_j9xgqrs wrote

But wouldn’t that mean YOUR house is too dangerous to survive? And that you as a owner of said house also are too dangerous to survive?

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Thr33Littl3Monk3ys t1_j9xk7ae wrote

No. The issue with the other house was that, given the nature of the late owner, who knows what kind of person she would have left it to...or who might have bought it at auction if she had no one to inherit.

Hers would be left to Grace or Derek, both of whom will have her compassion.

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MethAfricanTiger t1_ja0fdp4 wrote

These houses attract bad people. It's not about punishing the house, it's about self-preservation.

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MrsRossGeller t1_j9xhpvc wrote

I like to think each of our homes has a soul. I’m glad yours is soo lovely.

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Ok_Win7914 t1_j9xhy7q wrote

Poor thing I hope the house is ok! Especially as it tried so hard to help.

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Thr33Littl3Monk3ys t1_j9xk9n6 wrote

I was terrified of your house at first, I won't lie. But I'm heartbroken now that it's hurting. And I'm hoping against hope that it'll be okay.

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SweetSue67 t1_j9x5aee wrote

I am ecstatic to have caught the update jusf in time!!! I adore your house.

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S4njay t1_j9x67e4 wrote

Yo shit's going from bad to worse all the time!

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Flimsy_Struggle_1591 t1_j9xbnm0 wrote

Nope. You can’t stop now…I have to know if the house is ok!!!

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Firefly_07 t1_j9xzmr0 wrote

I so hope your house is okay. This part made me cry so much. I'm still crying.

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KaraWolf t1_j9y7ojz wrote

Feels weird, but I'd be going back for the poor bird that helped. Give it back to the house and maybe it'll help. Like taking an amputated finger with you to the doctor for surgery.

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emosaves t1_j9znvyt wrote

i have been waiting with baited breath for you to find grace! I'm not sure what's worse for those parents: forgetting, or remembering?

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bubblesDN89 t1_ja0a16v wrote

Forgetting, honestly. It seems as though the more crucial they are to your existence, the house has to work harder to eliminate them from your memory. The woman she met in the neighborhood definitely didn't seem all there.

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thatsnotexactlyme t1_ja1ad3z wrote

what do you think killed your house - it throwing up, or you killing it’s sister?

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RemarkableSuspect542 t1_j9x6i5g wrote

I’m really glad you and Grace are okay but I feel really sorry for the other house. It didn’t have someone like you to take care of it :(

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CF0E2 t1_j9xx26z wrote

I feel so bad for the other house :(

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Vinaflynn t1_j9yjjbr wrote

Your house will recover with your love and nurturing. It may take some time, but you will help it recover. I know you will.

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DevilMan17dedZ t1_j9zukvt wrote

I am Super Grateful you were able to save Grace. Goddamn, talk about scary shit. I'll be honest tho, I'm a little heartbroken about your amazing home. I hope she's okay as well.

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Bit_part_demon t1_j9znl5c wrote

I really wonder what is going on in your town... how many more eldritch houses are out there? I do hope yours is ok.

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MamaOnica t1_ja0l4z4 wrote

Does your house have a name? The poor dear. I hope it feels better soon.

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thndrgrrrl t1_ja17k4v wrote

How awful for those other parents to have to realize not only were their children gone, but they hadnt even missed them. I hope your amazing house recovers, and you get to continue your good work.

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RipleyAnne t1_ja4cl1x wrote

I hope the house doesn't die!

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thatsnotexactlyme t1_ja1a9nl wrote

if you had known everyone would get there memory back … would you still have done it?

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Moanmyname32 t1_j9y9tdr wrote

There is something that stood out to me in your writings. You wrote that the house pulls in certain people. What does it say about you? Did you always have evil inside just waiting for the right moment to be free? You slip right into killing like a glove slipping onto hands....🤔🤔

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