Jamaican_Dynamite t1_j5vl9tx wrote
"Marten."
The voice came from the door like a song on the breeze.
"Gabrielle." He responded.
"I've been thinking of our little arrangement." She spoke now. The unlit cigar she removed from her mouth leaving a small ring of lipstick on one end.
"Oh. How so?" He asked.
She undid the trenchcoat she wore to reveal a rather startling scene of what little she still wore underneath.
"I understand you are a man of business."
It took Marten a moment to really explain himself. Let alone what all he was looking at.
"One could say that. Yes." He agreed.
She slowly bent over the mahogany desk and breathed on his mustache from a short distance.
"And I know that you and Adam are mortal enemies. What with him thwarting your plans all the time. Business plans, I mean."
"Well, yes. I wouldn't say we're mortal enemies." Marten watched as she slid around the desk to get even closer. "More of participants in a large conflict of interests."
"I'm surprised you haven't killed him." She stated.
He wondered how much Adam had told her about him before. Not that all the times Marten himself had used her existence as leverage against him.
"I've tried. The guy just comes back eventually." He shrugged. Gabrielle, slid the cigar she originally mouthed into his own. She lit it for him with a practiced hand, blowing the match out effortlessly.
"He has a family. You know? Start there."
Why would she say that? The statement even made Marten reconsider what she was there for.
"That's a bit excessive." He reacted. "Plus I really don't know where to start."
"Well, there's a retirement home a few neighborhoods over. Just to start."
She had left him to stare out of the windows of the penthouse. She had lit a cigarette of her own and was busy watching traffic far below.
"You realize I am a businessman? Right?" He stood.
The demure look she gave him made his heart melt, but his mind race.
"I didn't say you had to do it. You have a lot of workers after all."
"Exactly. I'd go to jail for that. Besides, I have to figure out how to seal this deal."
"For what?" She quizzically glanced.
"Oh, these warehouses we're building. The orphanage next door said they're taking us to court. Partially because they couldn't afford the funds to stay open, but mainly because they fairly sure they still own the land."
"Ok. Burn it down."
"And I- What??"
He stopped his rambling diatribe immediately at that. What even was that?
"What?" She sheepishly asked.
He palmed his face. "Obviously, I'm not doing that."
"Again I didn't say you should." She offered up. "Somebody you hired could."
"Like who?" He tried to sidetrack.
"Snake. Or No Ears Bobby. I bet Fat Richard could probably do it. Even as big as he is."
The thumb under her chin along with the cigarette and glasses made her look like some weird pastiche between a pin up model and a librarian.
Marten spread his hands. "Richie fat as hell but he's not gonna' burn down an orphanage. We'll take them to court. Like we're supposed to."
She walked over and embraced him again. Quietly, she worked her way around to lean on his shoulder. She began whispering in his ear.
"You know a couple of your workers on the plant floor are stealing from you."
He paused his mild concerns. Money was always tantamount.
"Okay. Which ones?"
She turnt her head to rest against his own.
"Does it matter. Take a couple of them out back, skin them alive, and I guarantee everyone will get right."
"Why... Why would I do that? Why would I do it like that?" He began to perspire. A mild shiver ran up his spine.
"Because, fear breeds obedience. It takes that little spark of contempt for authority and..." She stopped to put her cigarette out in her palm, of all things. "Puts it right out."
"Okay. I'll think about it. Look can you give me some time to work on these papers? I still have to see whose getting the shipments for the hospital."
He hoped this would steer their talk somewhere else. Or at least give him a moment to think about the ideas she'd given him.
"Oh, is that complicating things?"
"A lot. We might not be able to cover this and the construction job at the same time."
Gabrielle smiled. "Let somebody else deliver the supplies and focus on your land issue then."
"Not the worst idea perhaps." He admitted as she closed her coat and took another seat on the edge of his desk.
"Besides." She cheered up. "If you poison the supplies before they get to the hospital, that takes the heat off of you, so you can take care of that orphanage. Then when the orphans are out of the picture, you can finally finish off Adam.... And the city is ours."
"Hello? Operator? Put me through to Adam Ferriss. Yes. Thank you."
"Adam Ferriss, inquiry agent. How can I help you?"
"Adam! My boy! Good to hear from an old friend."
"...You've got a lot of nerve calling me."
"Why yes. Yes I do. Spare me the waterworks son. I'm not calling for formalities. I'm calling you because it's of great importance to you."
"I'm listening."
"As you may know. I've recently come into the possession of a very fine asset I'm sure you're familiar with.... Ferriss?"
"Go on."
"You tried to interrupt our little soirée. What with your precious wife Gabri-."
"Ex wife." Adam corrected. "If you do anything-"
"Ah, but I already did. If you want her back, come get her. The wharfs, tonight."
They readied their Thompsons and waited now. His immediate circle having positioned themselves through the yard. Gabrielle patiently stalking the aisles still in her trenchcoat and lingerie combo.
"You sure about this boss?" Fat Richard spoke.
"If we're lucky." Marten muttered as he slid a drum into place and pulled the bolt back. "We'll get both of them."
"What?"
"Nothing."
As much as I love classic noir, they always did the female characters dirty. So here's a femme fatale on demon timing.
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Glittering_Estate744 OP t1_j5xhc69 wrote
Now she sounds just nasty!
Jamaican_Dynamite t1_j5z8l13 wrote
Even had the antagonist shook.
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