Submitted by GreatProcastinator t3_zry7jo in WritingPrompts
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Globoglobito t1_j17y11x wrote
Good read, took a bit of a dystopian turn but I really liked the interaction between both protagonists
TopReputation t1_j19q945 wrote
Thanks, glad you enjoyed!!
BuliuVega t1_j197t7b wrote
I'd love more, yes!
TopReputation t1_j19qcww wrote
Thanks for reading!
Dr_Hajime t1_j1anzcd wrote
Hope in the follow-up you imagined, it ends happily...
Thanks for the story, I loved it
TopReputation t1_j1brkyg wrote
Thank you for reading!!
OccuranceNotincluded t1_j16dm7w wrote
I was an outcast, a loner, and a coward. No one ever cared about me. But why is this random guy, who bit my neck out of nowhere, caring about me and giving me iron supplements?. As i stand still with shock, the So called "Vampire" goes off and say "Quickly take it, i litterally dont have all night!". I giggled a bit and said "Uhm.. i'm not that stupid to take stuff from a guy who just BIT ME!". The Vampire ignoring my words, shoves down 2 pills from the bottle to my throat. I choked almost ran out of breath, but luckily i remembered my flask in my jacket's pocket. I hurrily grabbed it and chugged down, after calming down before i could even speak a word, the Vampire says with a delighted tone "That'll do, now remember to take it everyday. I dont want my food to be murky and bland". I utter the words "What the fu-", the vampire disappears into the darkness, and me? I was just shocked and nothing more. I stayed like an outcast, and lived like one 'till in '99, the Vampire came back, and said "Nothings finer than aged blood, so they say." I was ready to die there and then, but some weirdo broke in my house and stabbed the Vampire in the chest area. And he shouted, and proclaimed he was a Van helking? Or Van Hellsing?, not sure but he immediately left. Police came after a report from a neighbour, i just filed for a robbery, not wanting them to see me as a mad man telling a vampire and a Vampire hunter broke in my house and adding it to my titles. And now i continue my life without any minor changes, besides being paranoid during nights.
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TopReputation t1_j17hdhq wrote
"You stupid boy. How many times do I have to tell you before it gets through your thick mortal skull? Twice a day, with water. And make sure to eat, for God's sake. Can't believe I have to remind you to literally eat!"
I shifted from my glass-eyed stupor and lifted my eyes from the television to meet her intense gaze. "...Oh, you're here."
She tousled my hair. "What's the matter with you?" She glared at me with fiery red pupils, and the unnatural alabaster pallor of her skin made her face and arms glow in the dimly lit apartment where I laid sprawled out on my couch. "Come on... eat. I made your favorite. Fish and chips, home-made tartar sauce. Spent the better of my evening on this so you damn well better enjoy it." She stroked her raven hair out of her eyes and shoved the tray of fried food towards me. It dangled dangerously on the edge of the coffee table and, though I was dead tired, I forced myself to swing myself upright and catch it before it toppled to the ground.
Because as much as I hated to admit it, I've started to appreciate these home intrusions of hers lately. What was once a horrifying break-in has become a welcome visit from a friend. We've got a weird arrangement going, and it's been so long I've forgotten how it was set up in the first place, but the deal is she comes to my place, cooks me dinner, tidies up the place and generally checks up on me, and in return I let her feed on me without resisting (not like I could put up much of a fight against someone like her in the first place).
I tentatively dipped one of the fish sticks into the sauce and took a bite. "It's good." I told her, and a small smile emerged from my almost as pale face.
Delia momentarily flushed purplish crimson in the cheeks before turning away and letting out a "Hmph! Of course it's good. I made it."
I chuckled. It was honestly cute how a century old vampiress such as her got so flustered so easily. But I was always a sucker for a good tsundere. "So, you're early tonight. Extra thirsty, or what? Or did you just miss me?"
She twirled a strand of hair in her finger, forming rings, fidgeted a bit with her worn leather duster. "M-miss you? Don't get so full of yourself, boy. You had it right the first time. I've had a rough week, and am in need of nourishment. And that's why I need you at your best and ready for a feeding."
I put down the tray and looked at her in the eyes. "Rough week? Was it the Hunters again? Are you alright?"
She blushed that blush of hers again before regaining her composure. "Y- what do you care? It's my business."
"Delia, we've known each other for what... 6 months now? I can't help but care about you now, even if you see me as nothing more than a bloodmeal. Go ahead and vent. I'm here, and I want to help."
She blinked. Her eyes narrowed in suspicion for a split second, gazing into mine until she was satisfied. Having seen I was genuine, she blushed slightly once more before settling down next to me on the couch. Her old leather duster smelled of iron. Old dried blood. She unlaced her equally as dark boots and took them off to get comfortable.
"Glad you're finally letting your hair down." I muttered.
In all of 6 months, this was the first time she'd settled down on the couch with me like this. Usually she'd just feed me, make me take some pills, suck a liter out my neck, and piss off while I lay in a heap on the ground, drained.
"Don't get used to it. But you're right. I need to talk about this with someone."
"I'm all ears."
"The Order's been on my trail. Sent some of their Hunters after me, the crazed lunatics. One of them tracked me down. Attacked me in broad daylight! These people, they don't care who gets caught in the cross-fire as long as a vampire gets dead. They're sick."
"Wait, I thought vampires get fried by sunlight?"
"Not all do, boy. My lineage is resistant to sunlight. 'Daywalkers,' the Order calls us. And its my kin that the Order hates the most."
As she spoke I noticed some white gauze peeking out the top of her gray button-up that she wore beneath her leather duster.
She traced my gaze and quickly pulled her duster together and buttoned up. "It's nothing. Just a scratch."
"You're hurt. You need somewhere to stay? Someone to keep a lookout for you? You can crash with me if you'd like. I mean, I'm not much good in a fight, but I can at least keep a lookout so you can rest well..." I've worked myself into an anemic shell. Long hours at the office, a slave to the megacorporate machine. If not for Delia, I'd probably have wasted away a long time ago, dead in my dingy little apartment on the 32nd floor, in a giant neon city with millions around me that would not be aware I was gone until I'd started to stink up the place.
Worse still, I was not modded up in any way. It was the 22nd century and I still had not gotten any chrome. Guess I was scared it'd change me. This had always put me at a disadvantage. At work and in my personal life. But it was this "purity" of body that drew Delia to me, so I suppose it all worked out in the end. 'Not much natural blood left nowadays' was what she'd told me when we first met.
She looked confused. "You want me, your tormentor, your bloodsucking leech, a monster... to stay here with you? Everything all okay up there, boy?" She rapped her knuckles lightly atop my skull.
"I've already told you just now that I've come to care for you. You're not a monster. You're my dear friend, and to be honest I've come to depend on you and your visits. It's not an exaggeration to say that it's one of the things that's keeping me going day after day working 12 hour shifts and all. So yes. Stay here if you'd like. I'll protect you, come what may."
"Stupid boy... silly, silly boy..." She wiped at something on the corner of her eyes. "I never wanted to do this to you, boy. But a Vampiress has to eat..."
"Delia... I'm in my late 20s. A grown man. Call me Lewis."
Her pale thin lips curled upwards. "Do you know how old I am, boy?"
"25." I said, joking with a straight face.
She took the bait and had a good chuckle at that. "No, boy. I am over a century years old. I was turned at a time when Man had not yet altered themselves en masse with cybernetics and nano-serum replacements... When the world's oceans had not yet engulfed entire cities and nations, and when red meat and drinking water was not yet rationed. I was here decades before you were born, Boy. So you'll forgive me if I cannot see you as anything but as a wet-behind-the-ears whelp."
"Well I don't want that."
You see, as much as I hated it, there's another feeling that's been twisting and knotting itself in my heart the past few months. And I've finally come to accept it.
"What do you mean 'I don't want that'?" She asked, head tilted.
"That is to say, well, I care about you, as more than friends. So..." I cleared my throat. "So call me Lewis, not 'Boy.' And let me take you out for some coffee this weekend. I'll ask my boss to not have to come in this Saturday."
She blinked, twice. Then blushed a deep purplish pink. "B-boy. Erm, Lewis. What? What are you saying?"
"I like you. I'm asking you out on a date. I'm pretty sure the concept of dating was around 100 years ago." I said, bluntly.
"W-well, yeah but... Bo- Lewis, I'm a vampire. I literally feed off you. Drain your life force and leave you a pale withered husk every time I come by. What on Earth could possess you to want to pursue a relationship with me?"
"Ok sure, getting my neck bit and sucked through like an ICEE slurpie isn't great but you're also a great cook, you come by and spend time with me nearly every week, and you listen to me vent and take care of me even when I'm being a pathetic little shit that can't even eat properly and just vegs out in front of the TV. You're someone special to me, Delia. And I won't lie to myself about that any longer. All my cards are on the table. Ball's in your court." I turned to face her and looked her in the eyes. Sunken eyes surrounded by dark rings met fiery red pupils.
"OK. Ok. Fine. Let's try it. Emil's Cafe, 12 PM, Saturday. Meet you there." She said, making a show out of looking resigned and giving in, but all the while her little grin gave her away. Contemporary vampiress wisdom dictates that you do not fraternize with the food. But hell, she'd started to develop feelings for this silly man as well, and his confession just now pushed her over the edge of self-control. She'd indulge in this mortal feeling, rekindled after a hundred years of dormancy.
...
I let her have the couch, while I stood watch, my eyes glued to the peephole looking into the hallway of my little flat. Occasionally, I'd walk over to the window and look down to the ground and scan for anything that looked suspicious, as well as scanning the horizon for airships that bore the Order's insignia.
A few hours passed and I was starting to let myself doze off when I spotted it. A shuttle with the Order's insignia, a stake punctured through a skull with fangs' eyesocket, floated down and landed on the ground just in front of the lobby. From my view up on the 32nd floor, the men were no bigger than dots piling out of the airship. A whole unit, about 6 men. I squinted. Looked like they were decked out in the latest armor and guns. Likely chromed up all over as well.
"Ah fuck. Fuck, fuck fuck. Delia!! Delia, wake up! They're here." Still woozy from being fed on, I leaped to where Delia was laying with her arms crossed over her chest, and shook her.
Took a good minute before her eyes opened and she turned upright in a 90 degree angle, eyes flitting around and slowly adjusting back to the world of the semi-living. Guess it takes a bit for her to wake after a meal
"Damn! I thought I'd covered my tracks. You're sure it's them?"
"See for yourself."
She took a look through the window and hissed through her teeth.
Looks like we're in for a fight...
[hit character limit. if interested, I'll write more]