HeartwarmingTroll t1_ixok2ef wrote
Reply to comment by HeartwarmingTroll in [WP] You're a siren who is trying to lure a shipful of sailors to their death. "Please", one of the sailors beg as he swims onto your island, almost too willingly. "Stop. You're so bad at singing." by ReadySetSantiaGO
My senses sharpen. I can feel my heart beating inside my chest, filling my entire body with the energy needed to stay alive.
My lungs are expanding ever so slightly as my breath is calming down.
My nose is tickling by the fluctuation of air pouring into my body.
My eyes.. oh boy. My eyes.
The colors are made of dancing matter. They swing around like there are no boundaries restricting them to the physical world.
I look behind the veil. The fog that is the stimulus processing of my calcified brain.
The answer to this question has never been easier.
"I. Am. My. Self."
HeartwarmingTroll t1_ixol883 wrote
I feel kind of sorry for shattering the very heart of the young man lying down to my feet, sobbing like an infant.
His desire is gone. He is an empty hull. Freed of his own limiting beliefs regarding "reality".
I tend to shatter those poor souls who willingly follow the call of my voice. A voice promising them the only thing every human truly desires.
Experiencing love and peace for eternity.
I lay down next to the man who is slowly starting to realize what happened. I catch his eyes. He delves deep into mine. He meets my invitation without hesitation.
"You are free of your desire now, my friend."
He nods. Looks back to the ship he came from.
Lifts his head. Looks up to the night sky which is brighter than anything he has had ever seen before.
"The darkness is gone. There is light everywhere.", I whisper to myself, as the soul of the young man and mine start merging.
"We will be one. Forever."
Without the slightest tension in his body, he accepts and embraces the light of our souls touching each other.
We are One again.
Sea-Membership-7671 t1_ixq5t0a wrote
These last 2 comments are an alternate ending correct? Or am I missing something?
Sea-Membership-7671 t1_ixq5upi wrote
Either way it's a great read thanks for sharing!
HeartwarmingTroll t1_iy4ox47 wrote
Thank you, sir <3
HeartwarmingTroll t1_iy3c7xo wrote
Well... I felt the urge to come back to the original prompt after a few hours.
Sea-Membership-7671 t1_iy7qjjs wrote
Well I think the ending is absolutely beautiful! Thank you for sharing.
HeartwarmingTroll t1_iy7wobt wrote
Thank you so much <3
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