Rupertfroggington t1_ixmtf2q wrote on November 24, 2022 at 5:20 PM

Reply to comment by RicePaddyFarmer69 in [WP] You're a siren who is trying to lure a shipful of sailors to their death. "Please", one of the sailors beg as he swims onto your island, almost too willingly. "Stop. You're so bad at singing." by ReadySetSantiaGO

Aw thanks for reading, Rice, and for the award. Really kind of you :)

mvandeloecht t1_ixmvtff wrote on November 24, 2022 at 5:36 PM

I haven't seen you before today but consider me subbed, this was beautiful, poetic even. Maybe I'm just projecting a bit of my own dramas into it a bit but really, isn't that the mark of something well written, when you can find a bit of yourself in the words? Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Rupertfroggington t1_ixppx0b wrote on November 25, 2022 at 9:18 AM

Thanks, I really appreciate that! And yes, I think one of the best parts of stories is being able to project and make up our own bits.

U-2berPlaysReddit t1_ixol4wv wrote on November 25, 2022 at 1:45 AM

I love storytelling, and this was excellent! I wish I could use my grammar skills to make good developments.

flyingmail t1_ixp38k9 wrote on November 25, 2022 at 4:30 AM

Oh, is your name Errol? Errol’s such a nice name and I wonder why there aren’t more Errols in the world. Love the story. Thank you.

Rupertfroggington t1_ixppulg wrote on November 25, 2022 at 9:17 AM

It’s not my name but I also really like it. I was thinking of an old movie star, Errol Flyn, when it came to naming this guy. And thank you :)