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peterhill160 t1_iufjx7e wrote

Patiently, the chicken waited until the metal boxes on wheels were nowhere to be seen. Then, he stepped out onto the road, keeping one eye forward, intently listening out for the humans.

In the middle of the road, Henrietta lay spluttering violently, with half of her chest missing, her intestines spilling out.

One of her eyes looked up at me.

"Seba...Seb...astian." The wind really had been knocked out of her. "Wh...what are you doing here?"

"Finally I found you. It's your weekend to look after the kids, bitch." I looked over at the way I had come. Three terrified, shaking yellow chicks, looking completely uncertain about why they were here stood on side of the road.

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GhostOfNaturEstuary OP t1_iufmayx wrote

The imagery of your post elicits the dopest thought of a dark horror toned sitcom cartoon! Like that of courage the cowardly dog! I imagine the show being called (Across the Road). With the reoccurring characters of Sebastian, the three chicks, and somehow a made it out alive Henrietta. Appreciate your response and writing style, thanks for entertaining the prompt!

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peterhill160 t1_iuhvx4h wrote

Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it. (Across the Road) would be an awesome title for the sitcom. Thank you for the feedback. :)

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