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CommanderMalo t1_jdxa5pv wrote

Reply to comment by IML_42 in [WP] Years ago, your mentor said, "Kid, there's a small secret when it comes to magic. You can literally make shit up and it'll usually work. Makes the guys who actually take it seriously really pissed off." Today, you're one of the least respected, and most powerful, mages in the land. by Prompt_Dude

Fin: “please Hal don’t do anything stupid.”

Hal: “COWABUNGA IT IS!”

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IML_42 t1_jdxhx0b wrote

Haha you’ve perfectly captured the essence of Hal in two lines.

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CommanderMalo t1_jdxi3yd wrote

Amazing story sir, I would totally read a start to finish about their heist planning and find out what happens because I’m just that hooked. Well done.

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IML_42 t1_jdxpbos wrote

Thank you. I really appreciate that - it means a lot to me that my story hooked you. Thanks for taking the time to comment!.

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