Submitted by OldBayJ t3_113bpzd in WritingPrompts
atcroft t1_j9nik14 wrote
I pondered the flame
That danced above that wick
How alike, how different.
Aristotle said you
Were one of four -- air, earth, water, fire
Making up one and all.
The poets have said
You're alive -- you dance
In the breeze, you eat, you kill.
The chemist says
You're oxidation -- energetic, exothermic
A reaction to continue while fed.
But I will say
You're unique -- one of a kind
Short lived.
That's how we're alike,
Born, burn, fade,
Candles snuffed out all too quickly.
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